Revised Post: Introduction to Research Paper

For my journal, I wanted to put my working introduction because I'd like some feedback and criticism on what to improve grammatically and structurally.

Image is from the NORML website

Is America finally becoming more progressive towards marijuana? Back in the 1970's, Richard Nixon began the "War on Drugs", which has continued through each administration. However, the American population may be ready to end an unwinnable war. In the two last decades, 17 states and the District of Columbia have implemented the legalization of medical marijuana and in the last election two states have taken a bigger leap by making the recreational use of marijuana legal. As states start to challenge federal law, it is time for the federal government to end its failed policies and accept the use of recreational marijuana much like alcohol.  

Under Duress, Image presented by ESPN

The Packer's Super Bowl chances may be solely based on how a group of individuals play that rarely get an attention from the average fan. As many Packer's fan would acknowledge, the offensive line hasn't played up to par this season. Now how big of a deal is this problem? Well for one, Aaron Rodgers as many other quarterbacks isn't that good under duress. Right now, the Packers are second in the league in allowed sacks with 37. However, to average fans people just think of get the ball out fast to avoid pressure but the problem with this solution is that cornerbacks just have to jam receivers at the line to mess up the timing of the pass. In addition, with the Packers lack of run game it seems unlikely that they will be able to help their line that way. Overall, I Packers Super Bowl hopes ride on protecting Rodgers from the outstanding potential pass rushes that could include San Francisco, Chicago, and New York.

Revised Post: Is Marriage Dead?

"True Love Throughout Time" caption by Random letter to the world

I do not know why this topic popped in my head, maybe it was the continuous re-run of romantic comedies. However, is it possible in the 21st century that the idea of marriage is overrated and that in today's society it's not needed. I'm not saying that marriage is wrong or that people aren't going to do it but with divorce rates at 50%. It seems realistically plausible that older generations actually lived up to those vows and our generation is to fickle to make a commitment of that magnitude. One example where I have seems when marriage is not need is a couple that is friends with my parents. This couple has two daughters and a house together but still have not tied the knot. When I asked them why, they said that it was just a document and that weddings are expensive. Both seem to be true but in todays society some kids don't consider relationships official without it being FBO, Facebook official. On a more personal level, the idea of marriage scares the shit out of me even though I want kids (yes, I would adopt). I mean one person for the rest of your live seems awful but then again maybe when you meet the right person everything will change. Until then I'm going to wonder if marriage may be an idea that should be left in the past.